Beyond the Sentence: Building an Editor That Actually Gets It
This is part two of a two-part interview with Will Frasier, founder of Story Stream. Check out Part One here.
- Some writers worry digital tools are built to correct them, not collaborate.
- You’ve said you want feedback that feels human.
- Story Stream is built on powerful tech, but it doesn’t feel like a typical tool.
- What role did other writers or editors play?
- Were there any early lessons or even failures?
- Who do you hope this tool helps most?
- Do you remember the first time Story Stream helped you see something new?
- If Story Stream could say one thing to a writer deep in revision...
- From First Draft to Final Polish

Q: Some writers worry digital tools are built to correct them, not collaborate. What would you say to someone hesitant to trust a tool with their story?
A: One of the core beliefs behind Story Stream is that AI is not a great writer. That might sound strange, especially since AI writes a lot of my emails and performance reviews. But there’s a difference between generating text and telling a human story.
AI is great at mimicking voice, but it doesn’t understand the human condition. It has never lost someone, never been betrayed, never felt joy after years of struggle. That depth, that lived experience, is what makes stories meaningful. And that’s something only writers can bring.
But where AI shines is in editing. It’s good at seeing structure, pacing, rhythm, and thematic patterns. That’s where a tool like Story Stream can really help. It doesn’t rewrite your novel, and it doesn’t suggest edits just to make your voice fit some template. It gives you feedback based on what you are trying to do. It helps you see your work more clearly, so you can strengthen it without losing what makes it yours.
We built Story Stream as writers ourselves. We don’t train on your work. We don’t sell it. We’re not here to tell you what to write. We’re here to support your vision, not replace it.
Q: You’ve said you want feedback that feels human. What does that look like in the context of Story Stream?
A: Human feedback means focusing on the things that actually matter to people. Emotions, relationships, pacing, the flow of time, and how characters respond to each other in subtle ways. These are deeply contextual. A single moment of silence between two characters can carry the weight of an entire chapter. Humans notice that. So we built Story Stream to notice it too.
Stories are complex. They’re not just about plot or word count. They involve pacing, theme, structure, dialogue, character development, relationship dynamics, genre expectations, and more. All of these elements have to work together, or the story falls flat. A human editor sees those connections. That’s what we’ve trained the system to do as well.
Under the hood, Story Stream tracks over 600 attributes of writing craft. But the goal isn’t to overwhelm you with data. It synthesizes all of that into clear, focused reports that sound like something a real editor would say. Not just what’s technically happening in your manuscript, but how it’s likely to feel to a reader. That’s what makes the feedback feel human. It’s rooted in understanding, not just measurement.
Q: Story Stream is built on powerful tech, but it doesn’t feel like a typical tool. How did you balance structure and intuition in its design?
A: From the beginning, Story Stream wasn’t about showing off AI—it was about helping writers make sense of their own work. We use Large Language Models, yes, but the goal isn’t automation. It’s insight. That’s why we built it as an editing platform that happens to use AI, not an AI tool pretending to be an editor.
The real balance comes from how we designed the system. We worked closely with an experienced editor to double-check every part of our workflow, making sure the feedback the tool gives actually mirrors how a human editor would think. Especially when it comes to things like character motivation, pacing, and emotional arcs. There’s a lot of editorial wisdom embedded into the system, things that aren’t just technical patterns, but craft principles that writers care about.
Structure matters. You need the system to be consistent and reliable. But writing is an intuitive act. So we made sure the tool doesn’t just run metrics; it pays attention to intent, to emotional beats, to the writer’s voice. We’re not trying to flatten stories into formulas. We’re trying to give writers clearer sightlines into the thing they’re already trying to make.
Q: What role did other writers or editors play in shaping the platform?
A: Honestly, one of my favorite parts of building Story Stream has been the time I’ve spent with other writers. We’ve met with about 30 beta testers so far, and I’m incredibly grateful to them. Writers are my people—thoughtful, wise, curious. The conversations we’ve had about craft, editing, and how AI can actually understand what a writer is trying to do have been some of the most energizing parts of this project.
These weren’t just quick surveys or one-off chats. We’ve spent hours—sometimes over multiple sessions—talking through how writers think, where existing tools fall short, and what kind of feedback actually helps. That input has directly shaped the software: the features we built, the way feedback is framed, even how we phrase analysis so it feels like it’s coming from someone who gets it, not just regurgitating patterns.
It’s a collaborative process, and it’s ongoing. The goal isn’t just to build something for writers—it’s to build something with them.
Q: Were there any early lessons or even failures that helped refine what Story Stream became?
A: So many failures… The first versions of Story Stream were clunky, and the feedback was often too technical or generic. But each iteration, and each conversation with a writer, helped us get closer to what actually helps. It made me excited to write again. It was one of those high-energy moments where I knew this tool could really work. Not just for me, but for other writers too.
Q: Who do you hope this tool helps most? Is there a certain kind of writer or moment in the process you had in mind?
A: I hope Story Stream helps writers at every level. It’s a powerful tool, built with a lot of care by writers, editors, and AI folks who all brought different strengths to the table. Whether you’re a seasoned author putting out six books a year or someone just finishing your first novel, the goal is the same — to meet you where you are and help you move forward with clarity.
I also know how intimidating it can be to share your work. That moment when you hand off a manuscript, even to a friend, is vulnerable. Story Stream isn’t here to judge. It’s your story expert on the side. It gives you honest, grounded insights, without pressure. You stay in control of the story — we just help you see it more clearly.
In terms of timing, Story Stream is designed for the editing phase. After a draft is finished, but before it goes out to agents or self-publishing. That’s when writers are looking for feedback that’s real but still lets them keep their voice. That’s where this tool fits best.
Q: Do you remember the first time Story Stream helped you see something new in your own work? What was that moment like?
A: I remember it really clearly. It was pure electricity. I was struggling with a slow opening to my book, which is not great for a thriller. I was info-dumping my main character’s entire backstory, and honestly, it was just boring.
But once I implemented the "Ideas" feature, everything changed. It didn’t just tell me I had a pacing issue in the opening act; it gave me actual ways to fix it. And the ideas weren’t just random suggestions like you might get from ChatGPT. They were deeply relevant to my story. It understood what I was trying to do, what problem I was solving, who the characters were, and what plot elements were coming next. The suggestions just fit.
It made me excited to write again. It was one of those high-energy moments where I knew this tool could really work. Not just for me, but for other writers too.
Q: If Story Stream could say one thing to a writer deep in revision and full of doubt, what would it be?
A: Writing is hard, because stories are hard, because people are hard. Stick with it.
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